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Carth Onasi Comes Home ch51Chapter 51Revan"Just like old times," Lassiter smiled when the doors closed on them. Compared to the narrow recycling tunnel with its rust stained walls the bright lift was a sterile contrast for its gleaming white walls. Taking a breath Revan noticed the air here was free from the lingering sour odor of waste that prevailed in the corridor. Most likely the air vents for the laboratory were kept on a separate circuit from the rest of the building. A fail safe mechanism Revan understood should any accidents occur in the laboratory. "Is it?" asked Revan him while allowing a smile to flicker over her lips. "When this is all over let's sit down and talk over dinner, you deserve to know your past Revan," he told her seriously. This was followed by a shrug and he added giving her a knowing wink, "That is if Admiral Onasi doesn't object. I sense his feelings for you are strong, but then, you do inspire men to greater heights.""Perhaps. You could shed light
Carth Onasi Comes Home ch50Chapter 50Jolee BindooAt the security checkpoint they were given hard looks from the men standing guard. The trio descended on the crowd at the gate and gave no indication they were going to stop. But Lassiter appeared to have been right about Czerka's enforcers. Unlike the employees stopping to show identification, the green and gold uniforms worn by Jolee and Carth carried more authority than any identity card. Though the thunderous expression hewn onto Carth Onasi's face may have helped part guards and employees alike. Without a word to anyone they passed the gate and continued along the footpath to the administration building. Beyond the double doors, emblazoned with the Czerka logo, the large lobby served as the show room for the factory. Around the perimeter of the room several models of weapons were kept on display. Standing at the center of the room was a small desk. Two smiling young women sat behind the glossy black counter with datapads in
Fall of Darth Revan, Rise of Admiral Onasi ch5The Fall of Darth Revan and the Rise of Admiral OnasiChapter 5- ~ -The Fury, flagship of Darth Revan, Sith Fleet"We need to send a clear message to the Republic," Revan said to men and women before her. Many of these people were former Republic officers who had fought under her in the Mandalorian Wars. Others hailed from Dromund system. "This is not a war they can win. I expect you to be efficient and without mercy."Their was a chorus of agreement among the assembly. Revan stepped aside and the lights dimmed. A projection of the Fleet's shipyards appeared above the rooms central holoprojector. Admiral Karath moved to the front, lightly clearing his throat, to address the room. He launched into a dry description of the security measures currently in place and what response they might expect from the Fleet.Nothing the man divulged surprised Revan. They were still attempting the same maneuvers and
Fall of Darth Revan, Rise of Admiral Onasi ch4The Fall of Darth Revan and the Rise of Admiral OnasiChapter 4- ~ -The Fury, flagship of Darth Revan, Sith FleetIt was no surprise the first assignment was an overnight on the bridge. As the newest addition of the Fury's crew he had to be prepared for some unpleasant hours until he proved himself. But that was no different than when he'd been an ensign in the Fleet.What did surprise him was the friendly manner in which his lieutenant greeted him. He was a broad shouldered man with a round open face who introduced himself as Sar Thul. The lieutenant gave him a tour of the bridge, introduced the soldiers who greeted Carth with a salute, and filled him on details of Sith command. Carth listened intently, silent and nodding."May I say sir, it is a pleasure to have the opportunity to serve under you," Lieutenant Thul finished. The compliment was unexpected and it must have shown up
Fall of Darth Revan, Rise of Admiral Onasi ch3The Fall of Darth Revan and the Rise of Admiral OnasiChapter 3- ~ -The Fury, flagship of Darth Revan, Sith Fleet"That may possibly be the smoothest landing I've ever had the pleasure to experience," Eva said from the copilots chair. The smile on her pale face was warm and Carth instinctively returned it.Despite himself, Carth appreciated the compliment. He'd landed the Sith lord's personal craft in the hanger of the the Fury with no difficulty. It was a routine landing but praise from a beautiful woman was still nice. And Eva was not what he had been expecting. Perhaps it was that she was merely a secretary, but she did not glower like other Dark Jedi. In fact she was friendly and fairly inquisitive. Carth found himself often at the center of her questioning, he admitted only to having a wife a son and was thankful when Eva didn't press the matter."So, what now?" Carth asked h
Fall of Darth Revan, Rise of Admiral Onasi ch2Chapter 2- ~ -The Leviathan, flagship of Admiral Karath, Sith Fleet"You monster!" Morgana screamed. Even though it was hologram Carth winced at the fury in her expression. He had been trying to explain his reasons for defection. But she had rejected each and every one and the conversation degenerated into a bitter argument.Carth shook his head while pinching the bridge of his nose. He felt flushed and his head was pounding viciously. At least this was happening in Saul's office, away from the attention of the crew."Morgana, you never appreciated what I was willing to do to protect you and Dustil. Even when it was the local militia you weren't happy," Carth tried, doing his best to lower his tone. Still he could hear the anger in himself. "The stakes are a lot higher now. If this is what it takes to keep you both safe, then this is it.""Safe? You said yourself the Sith were evil! How could we ever be safe with them?" Morg